tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post2463446042657924592..comments2023-10-25T09:35:43.321-04:00Comments on Have At It: Three's CompanyReporterGirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08948317070292582942noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-34791721397267823222013-04-02T08:04:27.520-04:002013-04-02T08:04:27.520-04:00Thanks so much! :)Thanks so much! :)Pink Fluffy Heartshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10879645888066599662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-2732545957308635542013-04-02T03:46:26.113-04:002013-04-02T03:46:26.113-04:00Great fic
Really well writenGreat fic<br />Really well writenMalu (malugargula)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14261483689044108236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-18337022185420009772011-02-27T00:02:08.869-05:002011-02-27T00:02:08.869-05:00Guilty secret, I looked for a story like this for ...Guilty secret, I looked for a story like this for months before giving up. So even though this was posted quite a while ago, thank you for writing it. It was absolutely amazing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-58540476793232501302010-05-29T17:55:19.290-04:002010-05-29T17:55:19.290-04:00first i was a very good story. two yes the idea...first i was a very good story. two yes the idea of haveing sex with some you without them knowing is wrong, but one she new that was the point two she allways wanted clark, i dont belive that that has been a point where if clark came to her bed she would have said no even in season 9 where they are not as close. they been throw to much. good story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-44577769673347999682009-12-28T21:17:01.895-05:002009-12-28T21:17:01.895-05:00Courtney-
I'm glad you didn't leave this ...Courtney-<br /><br />I'm glad you didn't leave this alone and that you felt comfortable voiceing your opinion. If you looked around my site then you'll notice that I have a section for requested stories.<br /><br />Until recently I accepted any kind of request and this had been one of them several months ago. It was intended for the enjoyment of the reader who requested the story.<br /><br />I in now way meant the story to be at all degrading, disturbing, or in any way a 'rape' scenario. My best friend was raped and it's not something I take lightly. <br /><br />I'm probably the most outspoken female I know and I'm all about women having a voice. The idea of the story wasn't meant to be taken so literally and I apologize if it offened you.<br /><br />That was not my intention, but then again when you write you always need to be ready for people and the different perspectives that they might take from the written word.<br /><br />Chloe Sullivan is one of my favorite characters and the reason for that is because she is such a strong female, this story was not meant to take that away from her and I'm sorry that you felt like it did.<br /><br />Thank you again for taking the time to send your opinion my way. I appreciate any and all constructive criticism. Have a great night.<br /><br />-CReporterGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08948317070292582942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-26860276402736927822009-12-28T20:59:33.963-05:002009-12-28T20:59:33.963-05:00I was going to leave this alone, but I can't i...I was going to leave this alone, but I can't in good conscience. I've been out of this fandom (and, in truth, away from the show) for a long time, and this couple is the only real link I allow myself to hang on to. We're a comment-happy shipper subset in general, and the fact that there isn't a dearth of comments here makes me think that maybe other readers had exactly the same kinds of problems I did, and chose to walk away rather than speak up.<br /><br />This fic is a textbook example of fanfic perpetuating a rape culture. I wish it was just the idea that sex would magically heal the gaping rift between to characters (at the expense of the female character, naturally), but that's just the beginning of it. That Oliver would use both his position of power (being in a committed relationship with Chloe) and her trust in him to invite Clark into their bed, and morever, into Chloe's <i>body</i>, without her permission or even knowledge is incredibly disturbing. It communicates a complete lack of respect for her, for their relationship, and for her long, sordid, already-painful history with Clark. That you acknowledge, once Chloe realizes what's going, that she's visibly shocked, hesitant, and unsure, and push past that by distracting her with <i>an orgasm</i> is not only insulting to her as a character, but is offensive to me as a reader (and possibly wildly-triggering to other readers, by reinforcing the widespread rape myth that victims enjoy their assault, when biology and psychology could not be more divorced of each other). The fact that it's Oliver who gives Clark the go-ahead to have anal sex with Chloe, going so far as to "kiss her to silence her surprised cry" just makes my mind boggle at how this could possibly seem okay. As an author, you've taken away her agency, control of her own body, and now, literally, her voice. Perhaps worst of all, Clark leaves the scene of the crime before the blindfold even comes off, Oliver then deigns to explain the terms of the "deal" to Chloe, and she thanks him for it. So not only has she been sexually involved with someone without her knowledge or consent, not only did she have no say in how she resolved her own problems, she was pretty much bartered like cattle.<br /><br />I don't say any of this to insult your written voice itself, but to call attention to what you're doing with it. Everyone deserves the right to make their own sexual decisions. Involving fictional characters (who just happen to be very pretty people) doesn't make that any more negotiable. You've just glossed over and glamorized many of the problems that exist in erotic fiction. I encourage you to educate yourself on rape culture, and especially how fiction feeds that particular monster.<br /><br /><a href="http://shakespearessister.blogspot.com/2009/10/rape-culture-101.html" rel="nofollow">Rape Culture 101</a> (obviously, possible triggers within)Courtneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15640140853910927612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-67432942432983518562009-12-21T23:02:03.378-05:002009-12-21T23:02:03.378-05:00StayceeM-
Aww thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it...StayceeM-<br /><br />Aww thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it! :-D<br /><br />-CPink Fluffy Heartshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10879645888066599662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-64331984067114163642009-12-21T21:02:18.997-05:002009-12-21T21:02:18.997-05:00Read on Ksite..great job...Read on Ksite..great job...StayceeMnoreply@blogger.com