tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post4359458271282398778..comments2023-10-25T09:35:43.321-04:00Comments on Have At It: Undercover Chapter (14/14)ReporterGirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08948317070292582942noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-83246186102007536412013-04-12T09:02:04.171-04:002013-04-12T09:02:04.171-04:00Aw! That is like the sweetest thing ever! I'm ...Aw! That is like the sweetest thing ever! I'm so very glad you enjoyed this story so much. This series was one of the very first multi-chapter, multi-story things I wrote. Haha It's got it's own soundtrack, it's own icons, hell it's own LJ Community haha. There are six books in this series I hope you enjoy them all as much as this!<br /><br />The LJ Community is <b><a href="http://thejlchronicles.livejournal.com/profile" rel="nofollow">here.</a></b> Pink Fluffy Heartshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10879645888066599662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-48776290627180733132013-04-12T08:56:17.303-04:002013-04-12T08:56:17.303-04:00I woke up today with a thirst for a Chlollie fic a...I woke up today with a thirst for a Chlollie fic and you were the first person I thought of. I remembered that I had yet to read so many of your fics, Cori. And wow was I glad I picked you because this had everything I wanted so therefore, it was exactly what I needed! You captured so many sides of both Chloe and Oliver as individuals and as a couple. I loved the plot, it kept me going, and I must admit I was shocked that Lex was behind it all. Your portrayal of Lexana was beautiful, and I don't even like them much. Lastly, the smut was excellent, wonderful writing there, my whole body was tense and I could've sworn I stopped breathing a few times. I look forward to reading more :D<br /><br />xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-70514110021927143022012-07-07T13:12:34.721-04:002012-07-07T13:12:34.721-04:00I truly enjoy the story till the end, the characte...I truly enjoy the story till the end, the character are well defined and the plot is interesting and has a good rhythm. I have a doubt about the baby, it coulg be Oliver's, but in her situation, without know if it's the implant or not I would do the same.<br /><br />Congratulations, a very good history, now I am going to read de second book ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-34938994671859956052011-08-26T01:17:45.317-04:002011-08-26T01:17:45.317-04:00All the things Emil had said made me think Chloe j...All the things Emil had said made me think Chloe just might be pregnant since the first time Oliver and her had sex. The strange bloodwork, the signs of early pregnancy. That Emil said her hormones might be going a bit crazy would make Chloe not suspect a pregnancy if she felt off, too. And the follow-up appointment might just bring the news of Chloe being pregnant, not thanks to Lex. I can't get over sheer Lex evil-ness. I think you portrayed him perfectly. And I felt Chloe's emotions as I read about their last meeting so intensely. It's hard to accept what's been done to Chloe. And that means your story is fantastic and makes people( or at least a person - me) feel. I also enjoyed the Justice League action and all the different characters, as you worked them in your story. Lana - how it irritates me, that she is in the mess of a situation created by Lex' inability to appreciate what he has, and what he can achieve, without, perhaps, trampling all over other human beings. Stuck in a marriage with a man she only thinks she knows, and now pregnant, Lana's rude awakening really is just waiting to happen.<br />I just wish for a little bit of peace for Chloe, so she can heal, not worry, and maybe enjoy a bit of normalcy that comes from being in a relationship with a person one loves. I hope I only imagined she's pregnant, a bit of time for herself, and Ollie would work wonders for Chloe. Great story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-48954126131967545792011-04-20T05:30:29.072-04:002011-04-20T05:30:29.072-04:00Let me reiterate I'm against procedures like a...Let me reiterate I'm against procedures like abortions...morning after pill use sparingly...unprotected sex wasn't the issue because well frankly they were lust induced and they knew each other. Totally disappointed about the fact they didn't question that she ALREADY was showing signs of pregnancy...uh were they stupid or negligent or just really ignorant? On to the next! Great Job! Loved it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-81839553513025511492011-04-20T05:25:47.607-04:002011-04-20T05:25:47.607-04:00Awesome, loved it...BUUUUTTTT am I the only one vo...Awesome, loved it...BUUUUTTTT am I the only one voicing the fact Ollie and Chloe were quite possibly already pregnant? So really after having procedure she was already pregnant when he removed the embryo...so really she had what I think is either a D&C or medication that will cleanse her system...so essentially she is aborting a baby that the both of them are refusing to voice. Another thing that embryo didn't have enough time to cause the evilness unless that was what you were striving for? But it takes one time of unprotected...is what I'm focusing on more. They had unprotected sex...uh hello???? That's the only thing I'm really disappointed with cuz I'm so against that. But great I can't wait to read the next one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-75971462598276743292011-02-28T18:38:15.505-05:002011-02-28T18:38:15.505-05:00Such an epic story. So well written and with a rea...Such an epic story. So well written and with a realistic ending - Lex getting away with it in his own Luthor way - but a beginning for our favorite couple as well! Absolutely loved this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-74997787892871252062011-02-27T15:31:12.945-05:002011-02-27T15:31:12.945-05:00Fabulous story! This isn't the end, is it?Fabulous story! This isn't the end, is it?Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06071243559197918299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-34973583725618579222011-02-27T13:54:13.276-05:002011-02-27T13:54:13.276-05:00great update..poor chloe they didnt manage to resc...great update..poor chloe they didnt manage to rescue her in time..hmm I wonder whats up with her bloodwork.... great to see the whole team there to welcome her home<br /><br />loved the interaction with Bruce and ollie reminding him Chloe isnt bruce's sidekick but Ollies :-) <br /><br />Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-81166733738171024172011-02-26T22:15:48.179-05:002011-02-26T22:15:48.179-05:00Yay no evil baby for Chloe! Poor thing, quick to ...Yay no evil baby for Chloe! Poor thing, quick to the getting "it" out. But Lana...eesh. Though I hate Lana and really wish Chloe would distance herself from friends who don't trust her.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-68198360690671996642011-02-26T18:16:16.372-05:002011-02-26T18:16:16.372-05:00WOW....Thats all there is too say .. The Lex twist...WOW....Thats all there is too say .. The Lex twist , really caught me by surprise ,I was actually wondering who they were up against , if it wasn't Lex. Second twist , was that even though The JLA did save the day , they didn't manage to do it b4 Chlo getting implanted. Your story was simply WOWAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com