tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post7597283591301132487..comments2023-10-25T09:35:43.321-04:00Comments on Have At It: Fragments Chapter (2/12)ReporterGirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08948317070292582942noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-47171052834832121452010-05-29T20:11:20.741-04:002010-05-29T20:11:20.741-04:00oliver you left to, only you left when to dranking...oliver you left to, only you left when to dranking and sleep with sluts, clark left for only 3 week and he was saveing city and learning how to save the world. so lose your attudie oliver. but this is a good storyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-33895510389437092342009-06-23T20:04:51.968-04:002009-06-23T20:04:51.968-04:00A very good chapter. The poor Chloe deserves someo...A very good chapter. The poor Chloe deserves someone support her. I think that Oliver is a good friend for here in this chapter. I am no very agree with the Chlollie because the show, but here Oliver is very different. He really take care of Chloe when she need him.<br /><br />I like see that Chloe have some support after Clark failed to support her.<br /><br />Very good chapter.<br /><br />RedGigantAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-73676489827350266212009-05-23T01:11:03.649-04:002009-05-23T01:11:03.649-04:00wwg- Thanks! I'm so glad you like the fic! If ...wwg- Thanks! I'm so glad you like the fic! If you think oliver has a heart in this one then You'll love him in Three Minutes and the sequel Sixty Seconds. :-) Thanks so much for reading!<br /><br /><3<br /><br />CReporterGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08948317070292582942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-40345764302952757172009-05-23T01:03:26.912-04:002009-05-23T01:03:26.912-04:00I like the way you write. The story flows natural...I like the way you write. The story flows naturally. I don't hate Oliver so much. He's actually got a heart in your story.<br /><br />I'm really enjoying your fic! :)wwghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00601662567529271507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-58472214382461828322009-05-19T17:59:21.032-04:002009-05-19T17:59:21.032-04:00hey awesome update, chlollie is my fav ship and so...hey awesome update, chlollie is my fav ship and so is chlark kind of at a tie so love it..... :)celianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1450799463391977063.post-28042420650425361802009-05-19T00:34:00.000-04:002009-05-19T00:34:00.000-04:00Great chapter Corina!! The changes you made about...Great chapter Corina!! The changes you made about the flooring were great and really helped the flow of the story. It's interesting to read how Oliver is going through/feeling all the same emotions about Chloe that one expects Clark to have. Well done!dh1031https://www.blogger.com/profile/16338598532289096246noreply@blogger.com