July 4, 2009

In Too Deep Chapter 3

Chapter 3
Friday Night/Early Saturday Morning
The Following Takes Place Between 3 AM and 4 AM

Chapter 4

They reached Jack’s hotel room fifteen minutes later. As they walked down the hallway, Jack took out his key. He slid it in, the light turned green, and he pushed open the door. Chloe walked in and closed the door behind her. She leaned against it as she watched Jack.

He threw down her keys, un-holstered his gun, and threw it on the dresser. He walked over to the mini-bar and grabbed a small bottle of scotch. He popped it open and chugged it. He turned and faced her.


Chloe licked her lips and watched as Jack’s eyes dropped and watched her tongue dart out. She shook her head. Her voice was low.


He took a few slow steps toward her and she reached a hand out to touch his chest. He leaned one arm out and his hand came up against the door on the side of her face. He leaned in and captured her lips with his. Jack brought his hands down to her ass and pulled her up.

Chloe wrapped her legs around his waist as he leaned her softly against the door. Chloe wasn’t heavy, she was a small girl. She fit against him perfectly. He looked at her face.

“What are we doing?”

She shook her head.

“I haven’t got the slightest idea.”

He grunted. Chloe leaned closer to him and seductively placed a kiss near his mouth, then his chin, then nibbled at his lips softly. After trying a couple times to capture her mouth, Jack let out what sounded like a growl.

“Stop teasing me…”

Chloe gave him a mischievous look and grinned while muttering.

“Can't help it…”

Jack raised an eyebrow.

“Really? Well two can play that game sweetheart...and I’ve never been one to loose.”

Jack slid the strap of her silk slip down her shoulder exposing the cup of her bra. He slid his hand against the cup and squeezed her breast. Chloe lost any focus she had left. She moaned and closed her eyes, as he rubbed the pad of his thumb across her nipple.

“Jack… Oh God…”

Chloe couldn’t stop whimpering as he softly kneaded her breast. His hands were big and slightly calloused and Chloe couldn’t get enough of them. He was hot and so damn talented. Chloe urged Jack on by rubbing herself against the bulge in his pants.

Chloe was breathing heavy and her body was writhing in his arms. Jack felt her hands push his t-shirt up once again and this time he complied with her request. He held onto her ass with one hand and leaned them into the door as she lifted the shirt from his head.

Jack slid his hand up Chloe’s thigh pulling the slip along with him. A couple of seconds later it was on the floor next to his shirt. He unhooked her bra and tossed it aside.

He leaned back slightly to get a better look at her. Chloe was leaning against the door, lips swollen and red from his kisses and at the moment Jack couldn’t remember seeing anything as beautiful since his wife.

He rolled her nipple between his fingers and her sudden intake of breath told him he was doing something right. He pulled back slightly to see her face. He groaned and his voice was strained when he spoke.

“We need to get to the bed.”

She nodded frantically as her hands held his face and she placed butterfly kisses all over it.

“Yea...bed would be helpful.”

He made sure his grip on her was tight; he pulled away from the door, and started walking into the room toward the bed. Chloe’s arms tightened around his neck when he stumbled a bit. She laughed and her voice came out with a small shriek.

“What are you doing?”

He grinned.

“Taking you to bed…”

Jack’s eye held mischief in them. Chloe’s front was flush against his and he raised one hand to her naked back as he spun and shook his leg softly to untangle his foot from his shirt. Chloe was laughing.

“I can walk, put me down!”

Jack grinned up at her.

“You don’t think I can make it?”

She spoke huskily in his ear as she nibbled on it.

“Well, let's hope you can…”

Jack made a b-line for the bed and tossed Chloe gently on it. Jack looked like a predator as her moved up the bed and over Chloe. The sight of her naked breasts in front of him made him groan. Placing his hands on her bare waist, he started pressing kisses down her neck.

Jack’s mouth moved hungrily against her skin. Chloe was panting and gasping in his arms, and just when she thought she couldn’t possibly feel anything more intense, he proved her wrong. Jack’s hungry lips found her breast and elicited a wild moan from her at first touch.

His mouth closed over her nipple and she felt flames engulf her body.

“God… Jack…don’t…stop…”

His mouth made a popping sound as he let go of her nipple.

“I’m just getting started.”

Her fingers grazed his scalp as she drew him closer and kept him in place. He was toying with her nipple again, nibbling at it, biting it; sucking it…Jack was enjoying all the different reactions he could elicit from Chloe. She was interesting and delicious to boot…He couldn’t believe he had just met her tonight.

Reluctantly Jack let go of her nipple, kissed his way to her other breast, while covering the one he’d left with his hand. Chloe cooed happily at him and let her hands wander down his torso. She reached a tentative hand to the fly of his jeans and unbuttoned it easily.

Chloe pushed them down with difficulty, since Jack’s body was so close to hers and his head was resting on her chest. She pushed his head aside and he seemed startled. She pushed him so he was lying on his back. She yanked at his pants letting them pool around his knees.

What in hell had possessed her? She was stripping a guy she barely new and yet she couldn’t stop. There was just something about Jack that made her body sing. He watched her with heavy lidded eyes as she pulled off his shoes and socks then pulled his jeans fully off.

Chloe crawled back up to him, kissed him with all the passion she felt and trailed her hand down his torso to his chest, his abdomen and finally reached inside his boxers. Jack groaned in her mouth as her hand cupped him. She kept kissing him fiercely and let her tongue dance with his in an insistent rhythm.

Chloe moved her hand up and down expertly and she finally let go of his mouth and trailed kisses down to his chest.

“Fuck Chloe…”

Chloe scooted down and placed herself between his legs. She kissed her way down to his abdomen, and grinned up at him wickedly at his reaction when she licked his bellybutton. She withdrew her hand from his boxers and heard him grunt.

She pulled his boxers down with both hands, looked up to meet his eyes and she could see the lust there. He wanted her bad...and she knew exactly how he felt. Jack was beautiful. Much more beautiful than she had expected...and he was big.

Chloe wrapped her hand around the base of his dick and started to pump him slowly. She could hear his ragged breathing, and she smiled. Seeing the drips of come on the tip, she dared herself to a higher level. Chloe lowered her head and slowly licked the tip.

She felt him raise his hips to meet her mouth and her name left his lips in a moan.

“Chloe…shit that feels good…”

Her tongue darted out and licked his length from the base to the tip. Satisfied with his reaction she took the head in her mouth. Jack was trying hard to control his hips but it was nearly impossible, Chloe was driving him crazy. Jack placed one hand in her hair to guide her movements and the other balled the sheets in a fist.

Chloe’s bobbing blond head on his groin had to be the most erotic thing he’d ever seen. He kept trying not to groan her name as she played with him with her tongue, but it was impossible His body jerked forward when he felt her tongue swirl the tip, gathering the moisture. God she is amazing...he thought.

Chloe quickened her paced, cupped his balls and added a stroking hand when she felt his breathing quicken. He raised his head up slowly to watch her. She felt him shake slightly when her teeth grazed him. His hand tightened in her hair and he jerked in her mouth.

“Oooh, god…”

Jack lost his concentration and exploded in Chloe’s mouth. His head dropped to the pillow as Chloe lifted her head, licked her lips, and grazed a thumb across them as she grinned up at him. When he gathered himself enough to talk again, he found her looking up at him expectantly. He smirked.

“You’re turn.”

He sat up quickly, reached down, grabbed Chloe and rolled them over so he was on top of her. Chloe gasped and he grinned. Chloe’s thoughts drifted off...oh boy...things are about to get very interesting...


  1. C.

    Woot woo! are you sure this is your firs nc-17? because damn!!!




  2. Ana-

    HaHa I'm sure it's my first. I've already written my second though! Go me hehe. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll probably post more tomorrow. :-)



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